Monday, November 16, 2009

my moment

a pitch black sky
more stars than i've ever seen
tainted by a mist of green
waving around in the air
kind of like a spirit
below
icebergs crackle
and break into the sea
that's the only thing
that breaks complete
silence


i think i'm too self-conscious about my writing
to call this a poem so i feel like i have to call it
something else so i'll call it a poetical thought

2 comments:

  1. If there was a "like" button I would push it. :)

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  2. I quite like your poetical thought. Keep it up. You transport me to Greenland.

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